Dear Editors,

After reading your article titled “Putting the student in student athlete” I wanted to give you my opinion on the article. I agree that being an athlete and being a responsible student full-time is very challenging. I really liked how you showed this opinion you have in the article because you show it very clearly. I don’t think the article was repetitive at all because you continued to add new ideas and quotes without going away from the main topic but still adding to what you had already said. I also think that it was really creative and intelligent on your part to add the tips that Sussana gave for balancing school and sports. 

On the other hand, even though the article was great and had really good grammar overall there are some things that could be double-checked. For example where it says “Three middle school students shine both academically and athletically, despite having a busy schedule.” The word “in” where says “both in.” 

To wrap up I would like to congratulate you because the article was very well written, entertaining, and easy to read and understand. 

Sincerely, 

Paulina López Vélez